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As I sit here all alone
An emptiness inside
I wish that you were here with me
To tell me not to cry

To wipe the tear drops from my cheek
And to whisper in my ear
To tell me that you love me
And that there's nothing left to fear

But you are gone, will you come back?
This is something  I need to know.
So I can hold up my head high
And continue with this show

You hold everything together.
Even though you don't think it's true.
But without you here it falls apart,
And I don't know what to do.

I pretend that I am strong
As I go from day to day
But this emptiness is crushing me
As my world starts to decay

So please just come back now
And tell me not cry
I can't live my life without you
I know because I've tried.
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chriseastmids Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
ive read and re-read this since yesterday, it stirs within me emotions and feelings ive tried to put aside but can't ....

"I pretend that I am strong
As I go from day to day
But this emptiness is crushing me
As my world starts to decay"

this is the part that gets to me the most ...
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BeautifulGiraffeFTW Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I feel like this so much, and I so appretiate really good poetry that expresses the emotions I feel :) This is REALLY good!
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AlexTheFork Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
Rarely fave poetry but this one just blew my mind.
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Requiem4ThierDreams Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love when an artist is able to have the emotions flow and allows the reader/observer feel what they have felt. I felt your emotions like they were my own. Excellent job.
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infallible Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is really touching. The emotions just flow out of the screen as I read it. I love that! :) :hug:
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